Beginnings Rewrite Finished

The Blog update is complete, so I thought I would let you know that I have finished the editing/rewrite of the first book in my Moses chronicle: Beginnings. Among other things, I added about 3500 words, revamped much of the dialog in the beginning, which was woefully lacking, and reworked the climatic debate.

I will be sending it out to prospective agents this weekend. Here is hoping it is good enough for someone to bite on.

If you want a copy, I will be happy to send you one (spiral bound) for $15 plus $5 shipping and handling. If after reading the book you are dissatisfied for any reason, you can return the book for a refund of the purchase price-no questions asked. Just click the Buy Beginnings button below to order through PayPal.


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